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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Dear Ali, I am fine and hope that you will be in good health it's being a long time since I saw you online, as you are always much freakish about major news from my country, so I am writing this letter to let you know about a news story which is now a day in highlights. This story is about digital currency in my country. In previous years my country had gone through with a major financial crisis and still, they are struggling with that many peoples are willing to legalize digital currency as it adopted by several other countries as well the government is now working on the law for this so that people can use it legally, and they can also track the peoples who are using it, to cope with the taxation challenges. They also told that it will be more convenient for the international transactions a well in the future if that happens than anyone can transfer/receive money internationally within no time. They also told that with this type of currency the residence in my country can also earn if they can contribute to the system by placing their powerful computer machine they named it mining as they can earn money by staying at home. Like you, I always wanted such kind of work in which I can take care of my family by staying home and also earn a handsome amount, once they finalize it in near future and publish a new I'll update you. Regards, Asad Mahmood
Dear Ali,

I am fine and hope that you will be in
good
health it's being a long time since I
saw
you online, as you are always much freakish about major news from my
country
,
so
I am writing this letter to
let
you know about a news story which is
now
a day in highlights.

This story is about digital currency in my
country
. In previous years my
country
had gone through with a major financial crisis and
still
, they are struggling with that
many
peoples are willing to legalize digital currency as it adopted by several other
countries
as well
the
government
is
now
working on the law for this
so
that
people
can
use
it
legally
, and they can
also
track
the peoples who are using it, to cope with the taxation challenges. They
also
told
that it will be more convenient
for


the
international transactions a well in the future if that happens than anyone can transfer/receive money
internationally


within no time.

They
also
told
that with this type of currency the residence in my
country
can
also
earn if they can contribute to the system by placing their powerful computer machine they named it mining as they can earn money by staying at home. Like you, I always wanted such kind of work in which I can take care of my family by staying home and
also
earn a handsome amount, once they finalize it in near future and publish a new I'll update you.

Regards,

Asad
Mahmood
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IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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