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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town and that was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magzine. In your letter 1. Correct the information in the article 2. Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information 3. Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to bring your kind attention to the information of postal code of my town which is mentioned incorrectly in one of the article of your recently published magazine. Actually my city code is 250609 whereas is the article it was published as 256609. I think it was a typographical error. As far as I know your magazine is very renowed in my state and a lot of people generally refer it to update their current knowledge about the recent changes in various towns. So, I think the wrong pincode information will mislead people if you will not correct it as soon as possible. I am requesting you to look into the matter on priority basis and ask you publishing team to do correction in tommorow's article. Moreover, please also request the team to write a line in bold font indicating that the pincode printed in the last article was wrong due to overlook information. I will be eagerly waiting to hear from your end and your help will be highly appreciated. Thanks you in advance. Yours faithfully
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to bring your kind attention to the information of postal code of my town which
is mentioned
incorrectly
in one of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
of your recently published magazine. Actually my city code is 250609 whereas is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
it
was published
as 256609. I
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think
it was a typographical error. As far as I know your magazine is
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very
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renowed
in my state and
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a lot of
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people
generally
refer it to update their
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current
knowledge about the recent
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changes
in various towns.
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information will mislead
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people
if you will not correct it as
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soon
as possible.

I am requesting you to look into the matter on priority basis and ask you publishing team to do correction in
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tommorow
's
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.
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,
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please
also
request the team to write a line in bold font indicating that the
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pincode
printed in the last
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article
was
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wrong
due to overlook information. I will be
eagerly
waiting to hear from your
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end
and your
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help
will be
highly
appreciated.
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Thanks you
in advance.

Yours
faithfully

IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town and that was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magzine. In your letter 1. Correct the information in the article 2. Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information 3. Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

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6.0
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