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You are undertaking a training on communication skills and you would like some advice from your trainer on an issue that you are facing. Write a letter to your trainer. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Describe the problem and why you think it is affecting you • Seek advice from your trainer in this regard Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam

Dear Sir, I am writing this to seek guidance from you for the issue which I am facing in my training session on communication skills. My Names Nick Jones and I am doing master`s in business administration. I live in Calgary and have been taking a coaching on elucidation techniques from 2 months. Last week my professor had given me the assignment “Causes of global warming and its effect” which I have to present on coming Tuesday. I am failing to understand the methodology of making the presentation and also not very confident enough while am presenting my topic in front of the mirror. My exam is in next week and this presentation is crucial for me in terms of grade as it will be included in my final marks. It would be a great help if you give some tips on what points I should add in the presentation. Also would be glad if you can coach me for extra time to improve my verbal skills and boost my confidence. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Nick Jones
Dear Sir,

I am writing this to seek guidance from you for the issue which I am facing in my training session on communication
skills
.

My Names Nick
Jones and
I am doing
master`s
in business administration. I
live
in Calgary and have been taking a coaching on elucidation techniques from 2 months.

Last week my professor had
given
me the assignment “Causes of global warming and its effect” which I
have to
present on coming Tuesday. I am failing to understand the methodology of making the presentation and
also
not
very
confident
enough
while
am
presenting my topic in front of the mirror. My exam is in
next
week and this presentation is crucial for me in terms of grade as it will
be included
in my final marks.

It would be a great
help
if you give
some
tips on what points I should
add
in the presentation.
Also
would be glad if you can coach me for extra time to
improve
my verbal
skills
and boost my confidence.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nick Jones
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IELTS letter You are undertaking a training on communication skills and you would like some advice from your trainer on an issue that you are facing. Write a letter to your trainer. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Describe the problem and why you think it is affecting you • Seek advice from your trainer in this regard Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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