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You have decided to throw a party for your friends on the account of your new job role. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • Inform them about the new job • Give details about the party • Invite them for the party Start with Dear …………..

Dear John, Hey buddy, How are you and How`s everyone at home? Haven't talked with you in a while. I am writing this letter to invite you for the party which I am throwing on the occasion of getting a new job offer. I have got a new job offer as a Junior Research Associate from Macleods pharmaceutical Company in a Product development department. It includes not only develop the generic product for a market but also look into the key aspects of the product research, develop and formulate the product and interpret the statistical data (stability & equivalence) which matches with the reference product and finally the commercial trial too. Party will take place on 10th January 2020 at a Hotel Renaissance Club at 7pm. There is will be drinks on the house with the live music & Karaoke. There is an arrangement for the accommodation too, as party will go up to 2am. If there is anything you wanted to know about the party, kindly give me a call or drop a message. Hope to see you in the party. Warm wishes, David Smith
Dear John,

Hey buddy, How are you and How`s everyone at home? Haven't talked with you in a while. I am writing this letter to invite you for the party which I am throwing on the occasion of getting a new job offer.

I have
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a new job offer as a Junior Research Associate from
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Macleods
pharmaceutical
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Company
in a
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Product
development department. It includes not
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only
develop the generic
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product
for a market
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but
also
look into the key aspects of the
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product
research, develop and formulate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
and interpret the statistical data (stability & equivalence) which matches with the reference
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product
and
finally
the commercial trial too.

Party will take place on 10th January 2020 at a Hotel Renaissance Club at 7pm. There is will be drinks on the
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house
with the
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live
music & Karaoke. There is an arrangement for the accommodation too, as party will go up to 2am.

If there is anything you wanted to know about the party, kindly give me a call or drop a message. Hope to
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see
you in the party.

Warm wishes,

David Smith
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IELTS letter You have decided to throw a party for your friends on the account of your new job role. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • Inform them about the new job • Give details about the party • Invite them for the party Start with Dear …………. .

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7 paragraphs
185 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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