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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? GEog
Dr. Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri Kumara Bandara. No. 210, Digampathaha junction, Digampathaha, Kimbissa. 23rd of March 2021. The Manager, National Savings Bank, Dambulla branch. Certification of the diposit loan instollments for the year 2021 Dear Manager, May I request a letter certifying the diposits of money for the year from 01/04/2021 and 31/03/2022, for submitting “The Director General of Health Services, The Ministry of Health Services, Colombo” for the purpose of obtaining the overseas leave extension for the next year period. Furthermore, requesting you to email a scan copy of the letter to my email address mensioned below. I will mension and attach the following supportive details and documents with this. Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Details; NIC No: - 753632190V Loan Account No: - 601030002595/601030002600 Savings Account No: - 1-0103-01-58925 Email: - hbkkbandara@gmail. com Mobile No: - +96892177131 Attached documents; Signed requesting letter NIC scan copy both sides Savings account passbook scan copy Money tranfer receipt One of the previous letter issued from the bank
Dr.
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Herath
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Bandaralage
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Kithsiri
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Kumara
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Bandara
.

No. 210,

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Digampathaha
junction,

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Digampathaha
,

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Kimbissa
.

23rd of March 2021.

The Manager,

National Savings Bank,

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Dambulla
branch.

Certification of the
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diposit
loan
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instollments
for the year 2021

Dear Manager,

May I request a letter certifying the
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diposits
of money for the year
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from 01/04
/2021 and 31/03/2022, for submitting “The Director General of Health Services, The Ministry of Health Services, Colombo” for the purpose of obtaining the overseas
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leave
extension for the
next
year period.
Furthermore
, requesting you to email a scan copy of the letter to my email address
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mensioned
below.

I will
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mension
and attach the following supportive
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details
and documents with this.

Thanks in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Details
;

NIC No:
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753632190V

Loan Account No:
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601030002595/601030002600

Savings Account No:
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1-0103-01-58925

Email:
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-
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hbkkbandara@gmail
.
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com


Mobile No:
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+96892177131

Attached documents;

Signed requesting letter

NIC scan copy both sides

Savings account passbook scan copy

Money
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tranfer
receipt

One of the previous letter issued from the bank
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IELTS letter Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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