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You have just read an article containing incorrect information about your town. Tell them about incorrect information and importance of correcting it.

You have just read an article containing incorrect information about your town. Tell them about incorrect information and importance of correcting it. 2bxAo
I am writing to you regarding the article published about ABC town located near the Heston beach in your famous travel magzine “The Travel”. some incorrect information about town is published in that article. I am regular reader of “The Travel” magzine, which publish very useful information about different holiday destination and adventures places for tourists. I came across an article about my town. At first, I was very delighted to see the article about my town, however this pleasure did not last long as I found out many incorrect informations. First, the berief history that provide its built dates are wrong. The article mentioned town built in 1657 by John Merchant, instead it was actualy built in 1757 by John Merchant. Second, the pictures of different buildings are not located in this town rather next to this town, which is 5 mile away. “The Travel” magzine is well reputed magzine in print media and people use it as tour guide. Therefore, It is very important to publish 100 percent true information. In my suggestion, if you can not publish the same article with correct information then at least an editorial note should be published. Looking for your kind regards, Your faithfully, BAC ABC town, north ireland
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published about ABC
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located near the Heston beach in your
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famous
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travel
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magzine
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reader of “The
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, which publish
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holiday destination and adventures places for tourists. I came across an
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. At
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, I was
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delighted to
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, the
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history that provide its built dates are
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. The
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mentioned
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built in 1657 by John Merchant,
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built in 1757 by John Merchant. Second, the pictures of
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buildings are not located in this
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magzine
is well reputed
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magzine
in print media and
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important
to publish 100 percent true information.

In my suggestion, if you can not publish the same
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with correct
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information
then at least an editorial note should
be published
.

Looking for your kind regards,

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faithfully
,

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ABC
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, north
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IELTS letter You have just read an article containing incorrect information about your town. Tell them about incorrect information and importance of correcting it.

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206 words
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