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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Sir \ Madam, This is Maged your new neighbor, I have recently moved with my family into the house next to you, my family consists of four my wife and I and two daughters. I am writing to invite you to a party next Saturday that I will hold at my house to get to know each other, as I believe that a party would be a great opportunity to introduce ourselves to all our neighbors and celebrate our new home. The party will start around 8 pm, I am hiring a DJ and a children’s entertainer for the kids, there will be drinks and snacks for the whole night. I hope that this party will not cause you any disturbance and it will be delightful to have you and your family here. Please do not hesitate to share your thoughts and suggestions with me. Yours Sincerely, Maged
Dear Sir \ Madam,

This is
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your new neighbor, I have recently
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moved
with my family into the
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house
next
to you, my family consists of four my wife and I and two daughters.

I am writing to invite you to a
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party
next
Saturday that I will hold at my
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house
to
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get
to know each other, as I believe that a
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party
would be a great opportunity to introduce ourselves to all our neighbors and celebrate our new home.

The
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party
will
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start
around 8 pm, I am hiring a DJ and a children’s entertainer for the kids, there will be drinks and snacks for the whole night.

I hope that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
will not cause you any
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disturbance and
it will be delightful to have you and your family here.

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Please
do not hesitate to share your thoughts and suggestions with me.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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  American English
8 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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