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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come mkk8

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to express my problem. As I have just joined this area in the last week. I am planning for the party with my friends and neighbors. I am worried about my plan due to the fact that it may create noise and may disturb you. I am explaining further that, this party will be held in next week on Sunday in my house. I have invited all of my university friends. Although, my plan for the party will be a pool party with loud music along with refreshments and dinner. I want to inform you that please join my party and have fun with us. Please let me know and I look forward to hearing from you. Your's Neighbor Jawaria

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to express my problem. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 this area in the last week. I am planning for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 with my friends and neighbors. I am worried
 about my plan due to the fact that it may create noise and may disturb you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am explaining further
 that, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will be held
 in next
 week on Sunday in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have invited all of my university friends. Although, my plan for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will be a pool You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 with loud music along with refreshments and dinner.

I want to inform you that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 and have fun with us. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know and I look forward to hearing from you.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?YourYours
Your's
 Neighbor

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