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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Miss. Landy, This Priscilla Smith your next door neighbor who just moved in one week ago. The one whom you helped to unlock a closed door. Actually, I am writing to make you aware of a house party which will be held at my place this weekend. Even though, its not going to be too loud, its best to inform you so as not to take you by surprise. A lot of friends would be coming to make the evening fun which might create disturbance. Plans have been made to make the event short as possible on the contrary, it can't be guaranteed as to when we will close. A DJ has been invited to play variety of music at the event. As a result, I would like to invite you to this party since it will create avenue for me to know more about you and the neighborhood as a whole. I look forward to seeing you at the party this weekend. Thank you. Your neighbor, Priscilla Smith.
Dear Miss.
Landy
,

This Priscilla Smith your
next
door neighbor who
just
moved
in one week ago. The one whom you
helped
to unlock a closed door. Actually, I am writing to
make
you aware of a
house
party which will
be held
at my place this weekend.

Even though
,
its
not going to be too loud,
its
best to inform you
so
as not to take you by surprise.
A lot of
friends would be coming to
make
the evening fun which might create disturbance. Plans have
been made
to
make
the
event
short as possible
on the contrary
, it can't
be guaranteed
as to when we will close. A DJ has
been invited
to play variety of music at the
event
.

As a result
, I would like to invite you to this party since it will create avenue for me to know more about you and the neighborhood as a whole.

I look forward to seeing you at the party this weekend.

Thank you.

Your neighbor,

Priscilla Smith.
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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