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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Respected Sir, I hope you are well and in your best health. Today, I am writing you this letter to take some time off from work as I am planning to do The Business Management program at Conestoga College in Kitchener for 8 weeks as I was waiting to get into this program for the last 2 years. If you grant me this opportunity, I can accommodate the work I missed for these 8 weeks by working some extra shifts and overtime once I am back. I promise not to disappoint you. The program I am taking will help me to do a better job here as a front desk person as I can handle and manage my time and operations better. This program will teach me to do a better job of organizing data. This can future lead to better opportunities for me at this firm. Yours truly, abc
Respected Sir,

I hope you are well and in your best health.
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time off from work as I am planning to do The Business Management
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program
at Conestoga College in Kitchener for 8 weeks as I was waiting to
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get
into this
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program
for the last 2 years.

If you grant me this opportunity, I can accommodate the work I missed for these 8 weeks by working
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some
extra shifts and overtime once I am back. I promise not to disappoint you.

The
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program
I am taking will
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help
me to do a
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better
job here as a front desk person as I can handle and manage my time and operations
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better
. This
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program
will teach me to do a
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better
job of organizing data. This can future lead to
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better
opportunities for me at this firm.

Yours
truly
,

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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.