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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Kamal, I am writing this letter to apologize for the complaint you did last week. You wrote a letter about a noise complaint from our house. I am very very apologized for the noise. I would like to share the reason for the loud noise last Saturday. Actually, last Saturday it was our family gettogether as it is our festival called "Diwali". After such a long time, all my family members meet at my house to celebrate Diwali. As part of the celebration, they were playing play cards and they didn`t realize that they were disturbing the neighborhood. They are in the trauma of joy. However, I am regretting for the loud cheers, next time whenever I arranged such a get-together, I will take care of the loud noise and plan a party in the daytime so nobody can affect in the surroundings. Apart from that I also give instruction to speak a little soft when they enter the house. I make a promise that you will not disturb again by the loud noise from my home. Thanks, Yours Faithfully Janki Patel
Dear Kamal,

I am writing this letter to apologize for the complaint you did last week. You wrote a letter about a
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noise
complaint from our
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house
.

I am
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apologized for the
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noise
. I would like to share the reason for the
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loud
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noise
last Saturday. Actually, last Saturday it was our family
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gettogether
as it is our festival called
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Diwali
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. After such a long time, all my family members
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meet
at my
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house
to celebrate Diwali. As part of the celebration, they were playing play
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cards and
they
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realize that they were disturbing the neighborhood. They are in the trauma of joy.

However
, I am regretting for the
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loud
cheers,
next
time whenever I arranged such a
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get
-together, I will take care of the
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loud
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noise
and plan a party in the
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daytime
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so
nobody can affect in the surroundings. Apart from that I
also
give instruction to speak a
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little
soft when they enter the
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house
.

I
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make
a promise that you will not disturb again by the
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loud
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noise
from my home.

Thanks,

Yours
Faithfully


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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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