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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir, My name is Viral Korat and I am one your student of course name Business Management at Plasma Institute. I am writing this letter to request you to withdraw my application for the course. I am working full-time as a Department Manager in Walmart Canada. My schedule is very unusual and sometime it clashes with my course timing as well. Sometime, I have to work over-time due to customers demand or festival season. Because of this, I am not concentrating in my studies, even I could not sleep properly in the night. In addition, I spent most of time in travelling from home to work, and work to college because my workplace and college are very far to each-other. I know your institute running the weekend classes as well. If possible, I would like to transfer my course into weekend, so I can focus more on my study along with my work. I hope you consider my request for transfer. Thank you for your time and considerations! Yours faithfully, Viral Korat
Dear Sir,

My name is Viral
Korat and
I am one your student
of course
name Business Management at Plasma Institute. I am writing this letter to request you to withdraw my application for the course.

I am working full-time as a Department Manager in Walmart Canada. My schedule is
very
unusual and
sometime
it clashes with my course timing
as well
.

Sometime, I
have to
work over-time due to customers demand or festival season.
Because of this
, I am not concentrating in my studies, even I could not sleep
properly
in the night.
In addition
, I spent
most of time
in travelling from home to work, and work to college
because
my workplace and college are
very
far to each-other.

I know your institute running the weekend classes
as well
. If possible, I would like to transfer my course into weekend,
so
I can focus more on my study along with my work.

I hope you consider my request for transfer. Thank you for your time and considerations!

Yours
faithfully
,

Viral
Korat
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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8 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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