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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come GY7L
Dear Mr. Max, my name is rahul, iur family moved next to your apartment a10. we have moved from the city side. We are planning to host one party for all our neigbours families so that we can know each other as welll kids can also friend in neighbour to play. we are planning tos tart party by 6 PM for kids to play games followed by dinner with parents and kids. In case you are not able to make the part i would to aplogies in advace for the noise disturbance in case as childeeren will make some noise when they are enjoying. looking forward to seeing you. Best regard rahul
Dear Mr. Max,

my name is
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rahul
,
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iur
family
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moved
next
to your apartment a10.
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we
have
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moved
from the city side.

We are planning to host one party for all our
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neigbours
families
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so
that we can know each other as
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welll
kids can
also
friend in
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neighbour
to play.
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we
are planning
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tos tart
party by 6 PM for kids to play games followed by dinner with parents and kids. In case you are not able to
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make
the part
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i
would to
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aplogies
in
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advace
for the noise disturbance in case as
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childeeren
will
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make
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some
noise when they are enjoying.

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looking
forward to seeing you.

Best
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regard


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rahul

IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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  American English
6 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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