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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Q0r1

Dear Aamir, Hope ypu are doing excellent. I am very happy to hear that you are finally making camping trip happen this summer. it goes withoput saying that camping is lot of fun. Camping bring us close to mother nature and it is good break from our routine life. it's allow us to spend more time with ourselves rather than with electronic gadgets. Well, it seems like camping is always fun but it is not the case all the time. You may experience some unexpected events so you better be prepared for it. first of all, is weather. You don't know what camping day will bring you, it may be feezing cold, heavy rain or scorching sun! You don't want to forget raincoat, a warm jacket or a nice hat that can protect you from sun. On top of that, if you are planning to do camping alone, you may feel lonely because there will not be many people around. having said that you may feel lonely, I have one possible solution for you. I was also planning to do a camping trip this summer, so I would be happy to join if it fits for you. Please let me know about making a trip together, but not to mention, with or without me, you will have a great camping trip. Best wishes, Viraj

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 making camping trip happen this summer.

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 saying that camping is lot of fun. Camping bring us close to mother nature and it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 break from our routine life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
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allow
 us to spend more time with ourselves rather
 than with electronic gadgets.

Well, it seems like camping is always fun This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is not the case all the time. You may experience This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unexpected This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
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so
 you better be prepared
 for it. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
, is weather. You don't know what camping day will bring you, it may be Possible spelling mistake found.feedingfeelingfreezingfee zing
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
, heavy rain or scorching sun! Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
 don't want to forget raincoat, a warm jacket or a nice hat that can protect you from sun. On top of that
, if you are planning to The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go camping".go camping
do camping
 alone, you may feel lonely This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there will not be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHaving
having
 said that you may feel lonely, I have one possible solution for you. I was also
 planning to do a camping trip this summer, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would be happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 if it fits for you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know about making a trip together, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not to mention, with or without me, you will have a great camping trip.

Best wishes,

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Viraj