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I am writing about your advertisement about your needing for a teacher with the French language for your kids in the local newspaper.

I am writing about your advertisement about your needing for a teacher with the French language for your kids in the local newspaper. kPwe

Dear Sir and Madam This is Hanieh Rajaie. I am writing about your advertisement about your needing for a teacher with the French language for your kids in the local newspaper. I am honest and hard worker person. I have taught at primary school in my city in Paris for approximately 7 years and as I have had a plan to come to Australia with my brothers and stay there for two years, I think I could be eligible for you and your children to teach the French language fluently. As you know teaching each language like French with the native person could help students to learn words with the correct pronunciation. In addition, I am able to teach courses like mathematics to your kids if they found any problems in any parts. Also, I can take care of your kids at weekend in case if you want to go anywhere like parties. Since the cost of living is much higher in Australia, I need a job to pay my expenditure. And based on my having experience I think I could be eligible for this job. I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to hearing from you. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions. Faithfully, Hanieh

Dear Sir and Madam

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