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My friend is learning how to drive

My friend is learning how to drive BMlDj
Dear, Luisa I'm delighted for you deciding to finally take driving lessons. Been able to know how to drive can bring you so much independence and advantage in certain situations. First of all, you will stop going by any other means of public transportation or even on foot. Secondly, you will reach faster your destination and won't be late to work. Thirdly, from personal experience, I found driving very relaxing and self-reliant. All because, you are the one in control of where are you going. Although, you need to be well prepared so you don't put at risk your life and others too. For this reason, I recommend you School Center, in this place can instruct you and provide you with a guide so when you go out on the streets everything would be on wheels. I love getting to talk to you, and I'm really hoping you get through it, mainly because this is an important decision to make. Love you, Regards.
Dear, Luisa

I'm delighted for you deciding to
finally
take driving lessons. Been able to know how to drive can bring you
so
much independence and advantage in certain situations.
First of all
, you will
stop
going by any other means of public transportation or even on foot.
Secondly
, you will reach faster your destination and won't be late to work.
Thirdly
, from personal experience, I found driving
very
relaxing and self-reliant. All
because
, you are the one in control of where are you going. Although, you need to be
well prepared
so
you don't put at
risk
your life
and others
too.
For this reason
, I recommend you School Center, in this place can instruct you and provide you with a guide
so
when you go out on the streets everything would be on wheels.

I
love
getting to talk to you, and I'm
really
hoping you
get
through it,
mainly
because
this is an
important
decision to
make
.

Love
you,

Regards.
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IELTS letter My friend is learning how to drive

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  American English
5 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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