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A letter for giving advise

A letter for giving advise nVRQn

Dear John First of all thank you for writing me this letter, I am really sorry to hear about your problems. May I can give you some advise and things will get better soon. Your first problem is about your timemanagment. I tend to you cannot account correctly studying and doing household chores at home what to do to relieve the anxiety before exams. I suggest that you could devide in twp part for studying and doing houswork which is more suitable your day period. For instance, you should prepare for tests in early morning because it provides your mind with effectly knowledge besides it Is good way to increase on studying. After you should do household chores what are also vital in every peapl's life. To my mind, doing houseworks help you to give fresh idea after hard your brain's work. I suppose it would be great to enjoy your mind. On the other hand, if you aren't satisfied preparing exams, you should listen some lessons which is depend on your homewors on phone while you are doing any works at home. When you will finish them, you will have sufficient time for tests. I trust you will accept this advise that would help you to make better. Let me know what happens Best wishes Norah

Dear John

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 thank you for writing me this letter, I am really
 sorry to hear about your problems. May I can give you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "advice" (noun)?advice
advise
 and things will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 better This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Your first
 problem is about your Possible spelling mistake found.
timemanagment
. I tend to you cannot account correctly
 studying and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 household chores at home what to do to relieve the anxiety This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 exams. I suggest that you could Possible spelling mistake found.devicedecidedividedevisederide
devide
 in twp part for studying and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
Possible spelling mistake found.housework
houswork
 which is more suitable your day period. For instance
, you should prepare for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
 in early morning This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it provides your mind with Possible spelling mistake found.effecteffectsperfectlyeffectederectlyeffetely
effectly
 knowledge besides
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it


Is Please check whether an article is missing: "a good".a good
good
 way to increase on studying. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 you should do household chores what are also
 vital in every Possible spelling mistake found.Pearlpearlpealpea pl
peapl
's life. To my mind, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
Possible spelling mistake found.houseworkhouse works
houseworks
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to give fresh This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 after This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 your brain's work. I suppose it would be great to enjoy your mind. On the other hand
, if you aren't satisfied preparing exams, you should listen This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 lessons which is Consider using a past participle here: "depended".depended
depend
 on your Possible spelling mistake found.homework
homewors
 on phone while you are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 any works at home. When you will finish them, you will have sufficient time for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
.

I trust you will accept The verb 'advise' is plural. Did you mean: "this advises"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?this advises
this advise
 that would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 better. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know what happens

Best wishes Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphNorah.Norah!Norah?Norah:Norah,Norah;
Norah