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Write a letter to your friend about you missing his birthday party last night

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Dear Mrs Peterson. I am writing to apologise for not attending your birthday party last night. That day I had an online lesson via telegram and I must participate it. Because, if I miss a lesson there will be a number of misunderstandings that I can't learn on my own. I must get a certificate in English till the new academic year for carrying on my work at the institute. That's why, I participate online courses for improving my knowledge during my vocational holiday. I do appreciate that there were a number of unforgettable and memorable events during the part. I hope all your friends and relatives came with their wonderful surprises. I am extremely sorry and sincerely apologies for not participating your birthday party. I believe, next time I will be with you at your important day of life. It will be unique for you. Please accept my apologies once again. Your sincerely Mrs Green
Dear Mrs Peterson.

I am writing to
apologise
for not attending your birthday party last night.

That day I had an online lesson via telegram and I
must
participate it.
Because
, if I miss a lesson there will be a number of misunderstandings that I can't learn on my
own
. I
must
get
a certificate in English till the new academic year for carrying on my work at the institute. That's why, I participate online courses for improving my knowledge during my vocational holiday.

I do appreciate that there were a number of unforgettable and memorable
events
during the part. I hope all your friends and relatives came with their wonderful surprises.
I
am
extremely
sorry and
sincerely
apologies for not participating your birthday party.
I
believe,
next
time I will be with you at your
important
day of life. It will be unique for you.

Please
accept my apologies once again.

Your
sincerely


Mrs Green
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about you missing his birthday party last night

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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