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You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day scheduled. Write a letter to the airline company: Providing the details of your flight, Explaining the situation, reasons why you cannot travel, Saying what you expect the airline company does

You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day scheduled. Write a letter to the airline company: Providing the details of your flight, Explaining the situation, reasons why you cannot travel, Saying what you expect the airline company does Jj5a
My name is XYZ and I am writing this letter to inform you about a business trip that I cannot go on, as I cannot board the flight number DXB129 because of a mishappening that took place last Monday. I had to board flight DXB129 from New Delhi to Dubai at 11: 30pm on Tuesday, 17th of November. But I can no longer travel on that day as I met with an accident at my workplace. Actually yesterday in the morning, I was walking from the parking lot to the entrance and my foot tripped and I fell sideways as someone had spilled some water there. I tried to get up but I couldn’t. I realised I had sprained my ankle. Some kind personals who were present there helped me get up and took me to the pharmacy for some first aid. I got a crepe bandage and some anti-inflammatory pills. I then went inside to wait in the waiting lounge. My foot started swelling and I decided to cancel my trip. I had a business meeting in Dubai which was a very important one. However, when I called and told them about my predicament, they were kind enough to postpone the meeting ahead for 2 weeks. I hope you will be kind enough to accommodate me on the flight DXB 129 which is to fly on the 24th of November at 11: 30 pm. I am also a member of your frequent flyer programme. I would be very grateful to you for this kind gesture. Hoping to hear from you soon! Yours faithfully, XYZ.
My name is
XYZ and
I am writing this letter to inform you about a business trip that I cannot go on, as I cannot board the flight number DXB129
because
of a
mishappening
that took place last Monday.

I had to board flight DXB129 from New Delhi to Dubai at 11: 30pm on Tuesday, 17th of November.
But
I can no longer travel on that day as I met with an accident at my workplace. Actually yesterday in the morning, I was walking from the parking lot to the entrance and my foot tripped and I fell sideways as someone had spilled
some
water there. I tried to
get
up
but
I couldn’t. I
realised
I had sprained my ankle.
Some
kind
personals who were present there
helped
me
get
up and took me to the pharmacy for
some
first
aid. I
got
a
crepe
bandage and
some
anti-inflammatory pills. I then went inside to wait in the waiting lounge. My foot
started
swelling and I decided to cancel my trip.

I had a business meeting in Dubai which was a
very
important
one.
However
, when I called and
told
them about my predicament, they were
kind
enough
to postpone the meeting ahead for 2 weeks.

I hope you will be
kind
enough
to accommodate me on the flight DXB 129 which is to
fly
on the 24th of November at 11: 30 pm. I am
also
a member of your frequent flyer
programme
.
I
would be
very
grateful to you for this
kind
gesture.

Hoping to hear from you
soon
!

Yours
faithfully
,

XYZ.
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IELTS letter You have bought an airline ticket, but for some reason you will not be able to travel on the day scheduled. Write a letter to the airline company: Providing the details of your flight, Explaining the situation, reasons why you cannot travel, Saying what you expect the airline company does

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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