Dear Sir,
Iam Sara, a resident of Rosewood town, Iam writing to you this letter to request you to provide us with new sports facilities for the population of our area.
Presently, we have an immense lack of places to practice sport in which can badely affects people’s health and mood, especially children.
For the moment, there is a dumping area behind the high school where people throw trush, children often play football and cricket there.
Hence I would like to ask you to build an appropriate public club including a swimming pool, tennis and football ground and a fitness area if possible.
Furthermore, I would like to suggest to you to reconstruct the neighbourhood garden wich is in very bad state to encourage people to walk or run after work which stimulate the brain to work in better conditions and reduce stress and regulate blood pressure.
Undoubtedly, your consideration of this matter will be highly appreciated by the residents of the neighbourhood and it will positively affect their well being.
Yours faithfully. 
Dear Sir,
 Iam
 Sara, a resident of Rosewood town,  
Iam
 writing to you this letter to request you to provide us with new sports facilities for the population of our area. 
Presently
, we have an immense lack of places to practice sport in which can  
badely
 affects  
people
’s health and mood,  
especially
 children.
For the moment, there is a dumping area behind the high school where  
people
 throw  
trush
, children  
often
 play football and cricket there. 
Hence
 I would like to ask you to build an appropriate public club including a swimming pool, tennis and football ground and a fitness area if possible. 
Furthermore
, I would like to suggest to you to reconstruct the  
neighbourhood
 garden  
wich
 is in  
very
  bad
 state to encourage  
people
 to walk or run after work which stimulate the brain to work in better conditions and  
reduce
  stress
 and regulate blood pressure. 
Undoubtedly
, your consideration of this matter will be  
highly
 appreciated by the residents of the  
neighbourhood
 and it will  
positively
 affect their  
well being
.
Yours  
faithfully
.