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Dear Sir, Iam Sara, a resident of Rosewood town, Iam writing to you this letter to request you to provide us with new sports facilities for the population of our area. Presently, we have an immense lack of places to practice sport in which can badely affects people’s health and mood, especially children. For the moment, there is a dumping area behind the high school where people throw trush, children often play football and cricket there. Hence I would like to ask you to build an appropriate public club including a swimming pool, tennis and football ground and a fitness area if possible. Furthermore, I would like to suggest to you to reconstruct the neighbourhood garden wich is in very bad state to encourage people to walk or run after work which stimulate the brain to work in better conditions and reduce stress and regulate blood pressure. Undoubtedly, your consideration of this matter will be highly appreciated by the residents of the neighbourhood and it will positively affect their well being. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir,

Iam
Sara, a resident of Rosewood town,
Iam
writing to you this letter to request you to provide us with new sports facilities for the population of our area.

Presently
, we have an immense lack of places to practice sport in which can
badely
affects
people
’s health and mood,
especially
children.

For the moment, there is a dumping area behind the high school where
people
throw
trush
, children
often
play football and cricket there.

Hence
I would like to ask you to build an appropriate public club including a swimming pool, tennis and football ground and a fitness area if possible.

Furthermore
, I would like to suggest to you to reconstruct the
neighbourhood
garden
wich
is in
very
bad
state to encourage
people
to walk or run after work which stimulate the brain to work in better conditions and
reduce
stress
and regulate blood pressure.

Undoubtedly
, your consideration of this matter will be
highly
appreciated by the residents of the
neighbourhood
and it will
positively
affect their
well being
.

Yours
faithfully
.
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  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
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