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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: 1. say how you heard about the plan 2. explain how you feel about it 3. ask for more information about it. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a VIP colony resident. I am writing to know more about the proposed shopping mall construction near my house as I have seen an advertisement, few days back in a local newspaper regarding the same and they are starting construction very soon. Let me explain my situation, I have been living in this society for about 6 years, and every year there is some construction going on without giving any notice, which causes myriad trouble for the people living here. As there is much noise coming from the construction site, big trucks and vehicle carrying construction material give us trouble, in many ways, especially to older people and children playing outside. Also, this time, we did not get to know about the construction from the authority. I would like you to request the developer to give us the timeline of construction, the construction timing on-site, and how they will ensure residents living nearby construction sites. The concern authorities should take note of it and will ensure the safety of their people. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Rohit Kumar Tripathi
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a VIP colony resident. I am writing to know more about the proposed shopping mall
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an advertisement, few days back in a local newspaper regarding the
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same and
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my situation, I have been living in this society for about 6 years, and every year there is
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some
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construction
going on without giving any notice, which causes myriad trouble for the
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people
living here. As there is much noise coming from the
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construction
site,
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big
trucks and vehicle carrying
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construction
material give us trouble, in
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many
ways,
especially
to older
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people
and children playing outside.
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, this time, we did not
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get
to know about the
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construction
from the authority.

I would like you to request the developer to give us the timeline of
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construction
, the
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construction
timing on-site, and how they will ensure residents living nearby
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construction
sites. The concern authorities should take note of it and will ensure the safety of their
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people
. Hope to hear from you
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soon
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Yours
faithfully
,

Rohit Kumar
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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: 1. say how you heard about the plan 2. explain how you feel about it 3. ask for more information about it. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

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185 words
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