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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I a

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to apologize that I am no able to take the course furthermore. I understand it is not a good approach, nevertheless, I have to make such decision. As you know, other than a part-time student, I am a full-time worker. Normally many people work them as parallel and I though I can. However, because of the Covid-19, many people lost their job in my company. I am the rest of people who survive. As there were many people left, much job have been passed to me. They cannot be finished desipte I was working overtime. It has been being a hard time. Unfortunately, my company is willing to have a second round lay off. I do not want to be one of them. Therefore I am going to continue the overtime working for the comming next few month. As a result, I will not have time to continue my study and I would like to pause my current study. It is great if I can defer my student but I think it is too urgent that the school will not accept. Once again, I feel sorry about the leaving decision. I appreciate to have a chance learning from you but hope you will understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Kan

Dear Mr. Smith,

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good
 approach, nevertheless
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have to
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make
 such decision.

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many
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people
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though
 I can. However
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because
 of the Covid-19, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 lost their job in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
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people
 who survive. As there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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people
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left
, much job have been passed
 to me. They cannot be finished
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desipte
 I was working overtime. It has been being a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 time.

Unfortunately, my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is willing to have a second round lay off. I do not want to be one of them. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 I am going to continue the overtime working for the Possible spelling mistake found.comingcombingcompingcoamingcumming
comming
next
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few month
. As a result
, I will not have time to continue my study and I would like to pause my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 study. It is great if I can defer my student This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is too urgent that the school will not accept.

Once again, I feel sorry about the leaving decision. I The verb ‘appreciate’ is used with the gerund form: “appreciate having”.appreciate having
appreciate to have
 a chance learning from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 hope you will understand my situation.

Yours sincerely
,

Kan