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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

I am writing to congratulate you on your performance at the centre stage emporium yesterday. It was simply electrifying. I am sure everyone in the audience felt the same. It was like a dream come true for me as I had always dreamt of seeing your performance live. To be honest, I couldn’t take my eyes off you even for a second. The synchronisation of your moves left me in complete awe. As I have always been a huge fan of you, I started playing electric guitar and drums at a very tender age. Now, I have become proficient at playing both the instruments and recently joined a local musical band which primarily focuses on playing rock music. By the way, would it be possible for you to be a mentor for me? I know you are busy, but if this is possible it will be a great help for me. I believe your guidance will certainly help me to gain confidence and better/improve my current skills. Thank you so much. Hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely
I am writing to congratulate you on your performance at the
centre
stage emporium yesterday. It was
simply
electrifying. I am sure everyone in the audience felt the same. It was like a dream
come
true for me as I had always dreamt of seeing your performance
live
. To be honest, I couldn’t take my eyes off you even for a second. The
synchronisation
of your
moves
left
me in complete awe.

As I have always been a huge fan of you, I
started
playing electric guitar and drums at a
very
tender age.
Now
, I have become proficient at playing both the instruments and recently
joined
a local musical band which
primarily
focuses on playing rock music. By the way, would it be possible for you to be a mentor for me? I know you are busy,
but
if this is possible it will be a great
help
for me. I believe your guidance will
certainly
help
me to gain confidence and better/
improve
my
current
skills
.

Thank you
so
much.

Hope to hear from you
soon
.

Sincerely
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IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Letter
  American English
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177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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