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You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to reply to letter I received from bank stating that my account has been overdrawn by $240. I do know the reason why the account has been overdrawn and it is actually bank mistake. I actually bought a car last summer and bought insurance, monthly premium of which was $240. Due to some reason I had to sell my car and I did inform bank as well as insurance company about it. Thus, this charge of $240 on my account is incorrect. I would like to have money back into my account. Yours Faithfully
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to reply to letter I received from bank stating that my account has been overdrawn by $240. I do know the reason why the account has been
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
overdrawn and
it is actually bank mistake. I actually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a car last summer and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
insurance, monthly premium of which was $240. Due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reason I had to sell my car and I did inform bank
as well
as insurance
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company
about it.
Thus
, this charge of $240 on my account is incorrect. I would like to have money back into my account.

Yours
Faithfully

IELTS letter You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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