Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

Dear sandy, I hope you are doing well. I am writing you letter today, as I am applying for Masters of Business administration in Toronto. I've been working with a bank since when I completed my bachelor's degree, I was exploring options for MBA when I got to know about availability of it in University of Toronto. However I still doubt application process, would you be able to find it for me? I hope you don't mind doing this for me. Yours Faithfully, Rahul
Dear sandy,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing you letter
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, as I am applying for Masters of Business administration in Toronto.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
've been working with a bank since when I completed my bachelor's degree, I was exploring options for MBA when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
to know about availability of it in University of Toronto.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
I
still
doubt application process, would you be able to find it for me? I hope you don't mind doing this for me.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Rahul
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
83 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution