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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter · say how you heard about the plan · explain how you feel about it · ask for more information about it

Dear Sir, I am writing to request information regarding the development of a shopping centre near Arad Block 214. I have been living in this area for 10 years, yesterday I saw construction sign boards and banners on the plot with the details about contractors and owners of the project. Firstly, I would like to thank you for considering our area for the development of this eproject. We have been submitting multiple requests for the last five years to the area’s community team, regarding the need of the shopping complex in the neighbourhood. Residents of our area are so happy to hear about this construction. We hope this centre will complete and open soon. Secondly, I would be really grateful if you could provide me some information regarding the entertainment area in the centre, and if the mall will have a grocery store or not. Because the design plan I saw didn’t have a grocery store section on it. You are well aware that the nearest grocery store from our area is at 10 km distance and it is always crowded, because it is the only shared store for multiple areas. Kindly update me regarding the raised concerns, Looking forward to hearing good news from you. Yours sincerely, Anna Chille

Dear Sir,

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 Block 214. I have been living in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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 for 10 years, yesterday I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 construction This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 boards and banners on the plot with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about contractors and owners of the project.

Firstly
, I would like to thank you for considering our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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 for the development of this Possible spelling mistake found.project
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. We have been submitting multiple requests for the last five years to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area’s
 community team, regarding the need of the shopping complex in the Possible spelling mistake. ‘neighbourhood’ is British English.neighborhood
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. Residents of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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 happy to hear about this construction. We hope this Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
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 will complete and open This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Secondly
, I would be really
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some
 information regarding the entertainment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 in the Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
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, and if the mall will have a grocery You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 or not. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 the design plan I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 didn’t have a grocery You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 section on it. You are well aware that the nearest grocery You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 from our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 is at 10 km Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).distance, and
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 it is always crowded, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 shared You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 for multiple You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. Kindly update me regarding the raised concerns, Looking forward to hearing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news from you.

Yours sincerely
,

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Chille