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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a resident of Wenshister street, Ohaio and it knew from the news that a new shopping center will open and located just across the street from my house. The Wenshister street had always been a neighbor friendly area, safe for kids and a quite place preferred by most of the residents in here, opening a shopping center in the area will change this into noisy, crowded area an this for sure, is not safe for kids, i have spoken to many residents and they are not happy with the shopping center. I think people needs to know more about the project and talk to the project owners in order to get more information about what bother them also details about the construction dates, purpose of the project, if any job openings available for the neighborhood people and about the size of the shopping center. Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours faityhfully, Moustafa Ibrahim Hosny

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm a resident of Possible spelling mistake found.WinchesterResister
Wenshister
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shopping
 center will open and located This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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house
.

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Wenshister
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shopping
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many
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 they are not happy with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 center.

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think
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people
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needs
 to know more about the project and talk to the project owners in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more information about what bother them also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the construction dates, purpose of the project, if any job openings available for the neighborhood This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and about the size of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 center.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.faithfully
faityhfully
,

Moustafa Ibrahim Possible spelling mistake found.Horny
Hosny