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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Dear Ajay, It was indeed a great pleasure to receive your letter and learn that you got a new job. I still cherish our friendship and haven’t forgotten about those good times we spent together in a vibrant city like Goa. Now I'm thrilled to be invited to visit you in Ottawa in Canada which I too very much wish. I never been to Canada earlier so, I have little knowledge about the climate and the culture. I expect your suggestion and tips on this I wish you could advice me on this. Besides it would be a pleasure for me to get some gift for you and your family. I would like to get some gifts for you and your family and wondering what would be appropriate! I have since applied for the visa, and I will receive it around the end of this month so, I am pleased to know what will be the climate at that time and what type of dress is suitable? I have no idea about your plan for our activities. It could be great if you are expressing some in advance. As you know, I am a pure Vegetarian, and I believe that it would not be a problem while I am there. Can't wait to see you. Stay safe With Love Anushia

Dear Ajay,

It was indeed
 a great pleasure to receive your letter and learn that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a new job. I still
 cherish our friendship and haven’t forgotten about those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 times we spent together in a vibrant city like Goa. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I'm thrilled to be invited
 to visit you in Ottawa in Canada which I too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much wish.

I You used a past participle without using any required verb (‘be’ or ‘have’).have never beennever wasnever were
never been
 to Canada earlier This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 knowledge about the climate and the culture. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 your suggestion and tips on this I wish you could The word ‘advise’ is a noun. Did you mean “advise” (verb)?advise
advice
 me on this. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Besides,
Besides
 it would be a pleasure for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 gift for you and your family. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 gifts for you and your family and wondering what would be appropriate!

I have since applied for the visa, and I will receive it around the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this month This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to know what will be the climate at that time and what type of dress is suitable? Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 have no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about your plan for our activities. It could be great if you are expressing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 in advance. As you know, I am a pure Vegetarian, and I believe that it would not be a problem while I am there.

Can't wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you. Stay safe

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.Anushia.Anushia!Anushia?Anushia:Anushia,Anushia;
Anushia