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You have given a renovation contract of your home to a builder but you are dissatisfied with the builder's work Write a letter to the builder. In your letter -about the things the builder has not done well -the problems you are facing as a result -what you want the builder to do

Dear Mr. Verma, I am writing this letter to express my extreme dissatisfaction with the renovation work, which has done by your team at my house. As you know very well, my family is going to join me in this house from next month and this was a major reason for renovation of house. I regret to say, but our work did not meet with my expectation on account of some major aspects. First and foremost, the leakage problem of roof near the main bedroom and study room is still there which make conditions worse during the rainy season. Second, the tiles and marvel which is used to make floor is very slippery, which can lead to any serious accident at any time. Moreover, taps in bathroom keep leak all time because of this wastage of water took place. I strong assert that all these problems should be addressed at the earliest so that I can started to reside with my family without any such trouble. I am wating for your early and favourable reply. Your Faithfully, Kuljeet Singh.
Dear Mr.
Verma
,

I am writing this letter to express my extreme dissatisfaction with the renovation work, which has done by your team at my
house
. As you know
very
well, my family is going to
join
me in this
house
from
next
month and this was a major reason for renovation of
house
.

I regret to say,
but
our work did not
meet
with my expectation on account of
some
major aspects.
First
and foremost, the leakage problem of roof near the main bedroom and study room is
still
there which
make
conditions worse during the rainy season. Second, the tiles and marvel which is
used
to
make
floor is
very
slippery, which can lead to any serious accident at any time.
Moreover
, taps in bathroom
keep
leak all time
because of this
wastage of water took place.

I
strong assert that all these problems should
be addressed
at the earliest
so
that I can
started
to reside with my family without any such trouble. I am
wating
for your early and
favourable
reply.

Your
Faithfully
,

Kuljeet
Singh.
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IELTS letter You have given a renovation contract of your home to a builder but you are dissatisfied with the builder's work Write a letter to the builder. In your letter -about the things the builder has not done well -the problems you are facing as a result -what you want the builder to do

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  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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