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Dear Sir, My name is Alvin Cruz. Last week I have rented your Ford Expedition, Variant G, model year is twenty ten and plate Number is BBB-888 in your branch is Cubao, Quezon City. The agreed duration of the lease is for one month. While I was driving in Quirino Highway go to Makati City to join my family for Christmas holiday, I was unfortunately caught in an accident. The car behind me accidentally have move forward while we are on a traffic stop. The damage of compartment and bumper was minor dent and scratches. Luckily no one was hurt from both sides. Immediately after the accident, I have asked for the details of the other driver who introduces him as a lawyer. He agreed to shouldered all the expenses for the repairs and this was also confirm by his car insurance. The only requirement the insurance asked is a police report which I already took care of during that day. Sincerely yours, Mark Lester Marte
Dear Sir,

My name is Alvin Cruz. Last week I have rented your Ford Expedition, Variant G, model year is twenty ten and plate Number is BBB-888 in your branch is
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Cubao
, Quezon City. The
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agreed
duration of the lease is for one month.

While I was driving in
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Quirino
Highway go to
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Makati
City to
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join
my family for Christmas holiday, I was unfortunately caught in an accident. The car behind me
accidentally
have
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move
forward while we are on a traffic
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stop
. The
The usual collocation for the word “damage” is “to”, not “of”.
damage of
compartment and bumper was minor dent and scratches. Luckily no one
was hurt
from both sides.

Immediately after the accident, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
asked for
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the other driver who introduces him as a lawyer. He
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to shouldered all the expenses for the repairs and this was
also
confirm by his car insurance. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
requirement the insurance asked is a police report which I already took care of during that day.

Sincerely
yours,

Mark Lester
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Marte
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your council to complain about

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165 words
6.0
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