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You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: - Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. - Polite. No one responds to insults. - Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? - Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: - Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. - Polite. No one responds to insults. - Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? - Firmness. You want to be taken seriously. E8Vb
Dear Manager, I am a resident of Apex society nearby to your Chawla restaurant. Yesterday I came to your restaurant for dinner and I ordered a Chinese Platter. Unfortunately, the food was not up to the mark. It was cold, tasteless, and stale. It was not the first time I faced this issue at your restaurant. The staff you have hired is not taking his responsibility properly. I saw a lot of conflicts between them and things are not streamlined. So they don't have any care about the image of the restaurant even a few of them are rude. I come to this restaurant more often but never faced these kinds of problems. It seems to me that new staff is not properly trained and they are not professional regarding their job and duties. On behalf of this letter I just want to share the suggestion regarding some strict actions against them and some processes that need to be streamlined Yours faithfully, Atul
Dear Manager,

I am a resident of Apex society nearby to your
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Chawla
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restaurant
. Yesterday I came to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
for dinner and I ordered a Chinese Platter. Unfortunately, the food was not up to the mark. It was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
, tasteless, and stale.

It was not the
first
time I faced this issue at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. The staff you have hired is not taking his responsibility
properly
. I
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saw
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a lot of
conflicts between them and things are not streamlined.

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So
they don't have any care about the image of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
even a few of them are rude.

I
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come
to this
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restaurant
more
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often
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but
never faced these kinds of problems. It seems to me that new staff

is not
properly
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trained and
they are not professional regarding their job and duties. On behalf of this letter

I
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just
want to share the suggestion regarding
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some
strict actions against them and
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some
processes that need to be

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streamlined


Yours
faithfully
,

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Atul

IELTS letter You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: - Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. - Polite. No one responds to insults. - Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? - Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

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162 words
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