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I am writing this letter to inform you regarding Ms. amara who needs further assistance and care for speedy recovery. Ms. amanda was admitted on 16/7/2017 with the complaints of ankle pain and chronic burninc sensation. Besides, her left foot was amputated but she can commute independently. Her past medical history reveals that she is a known case of hypertension and type 2 diabetes mellitus. Hence Dibex, beta blockers, calcium channerl blockers has been commenced. Please note that she speaks only Arabic and her son Ahmed is the interpreter and will provide the necessary information needed. As per the discharge plan it would be appreciated if you could assess her ankle and administer paracetamol for pain and deep heat cream for burning sensation. Please assist her in taking shower and also in installing assistive devices. Of note, her dressing needs to be changes regularly. Thank you for agreeing with this matter. please don’t hesitate to contact me for further queries. Yours sincerely, Charge nurse Westnrogh medical clinic, west broiu 3038
I am writing this letter to inform you regarding Ms.
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amara
who needs
further
assistance and care for speedy recovery.

Ms.
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amanda
was admitted
on 16/7/2017 with the complaints of ankle pain and chronic
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burninc
sensation.
Besides
, her
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left
foot
was amputated
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but
she can commute
independently
. Her past medical history reveals that she is a known case of hypertension and type 2 diabetes mellitus.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
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Dibex
, beta blockers, calcium
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channerl
blockers has
been commenced
.

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Please
note that she speaks
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
Arabic and her son Ahmed is the interpreter and will provide the necessary information needed.

As per the discharge plan it would
be appreciated
if you could assess her ankle and administer paracetamol for pain and deep heat cream for burning sensation.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
assist her in taking shower and
also
in installing assistive devices. Of note, her dressing needs to be
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changes
regularly
.

Thank you for agreeing with this matter.
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please
don’t hesitate to contact me for
further
queries.

Yours
sincerely
,

Charge nurse

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Westnrogh
medical clinic, west
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broiu
3038
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169 words
5.5
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