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You had a misunderstanding with your friend and you lost your temper. Write to your friend: - Apologize for your behaviour - Tell him what the misunderstanding was - suggest a place where you can meet and make up

You had a misunderstanding with your friend and you lost your temper. Write to your friend: - Apologize for your behaviour - Tell him what the misunderstanding was - suggest a place where you can meet and make up 8glBG
Dear Miti, Hope you are good. I am writing this letter seeking your apology for my irrational behaviour in the get together party yesterday. I feel very regret about the words which I uttered for you. I know that was an unacceptable behaviour from my side but please give me a chance to explain myself. Since last week I am having a tight deadline imposed by my boss and I am having huge piles of work in the office. When we were debating at the party on the office work, I lost my temper and thought that you were pin pointing on me and I behaved harshly. When I returned home, I realized that the debate was going in a general manner and I took it on me. I know, no excuse can heal the wound which happened because of my misdeeds. But still, I heartily apologize for my misbehaviour. I really would like to meet you in person and make it up in upcoming weekend at the cafe near your home. Eagerly waiting to meet you. Yours affectionate, Jinal
Dear
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Miti
,

Hope you are
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good
. I am writing this letter seeking your apology for my irrational
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behaviour
in the
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get
together party yesterday. I feel
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very
regret about the words which I uttered for you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know that was an unacceptable
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behaviour
from my side
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but
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please
give me a chance to
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explain
myself.

Since last week I am having a tight deadline imposed by my boss and I am having huge piles of work in the office. When we were debating at the party on the office work, I lost my temper and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that you were pin pointing on me and I behaved
harshly
. When I returned home, I realized that the debate was going
Consider replacing "in a general manner" with the adverb for "general"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a general manner
and I took it on me. I know, no excuse can heal the wound which happened
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because
of my misdeeds.
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But
still
, I
heartily
apologize for my
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misbehaviour
.

I
really
would like to
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meet
you in person and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up in upcoming weekend at the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
near your home.

Eagerly
waiting to
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meet
you.

Yours affectionate,
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Jinal

IELTS letter You had a misunderstanding with your friend and you lost your temper. Write to your friend: - Apologize for your behaviour - Tell him what the misunderstanding was - suggest a place where you can meet and make up

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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