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you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to your boss. In the letter: tell your boss of your decision and explain why you are leaving. Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving. Ask for a letter of reference.

Dear Mr. Starr, I am writing this letter to inform you about my resignation from the job. I have decided to resign and look for a job in a different field. Firstly, I want to inform you that I have decided to resign from the team leader position. This is mainly because I am seeking for a job in the management field, as I have completed my MBA while working at your company; and not because I wasn’t satisfied with the job assigned to me. Secondly, I would like to tell you that working under your guidance has really helped me a lot. It helped me in the development of both personal and professional life. It taught me many things such as time management, work ethics, handling of situations, safety and many more. I would like to thank you for all the support you have provided and guided me to achieve success personally and professionally. I am deeply saddened by the fact that I have to leave this job, as I was strongly attached to the work environment and people who worked with me. Lastly, I would request you to provide me with a letter of reference and mention about the work I undertook at your company. It would be of a great help, if you could consider my request and accept my resignation. Thanking you in advance for you help. Yours Sincerely Tony Colaco
Dear Mr. Starr,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my resignation from the
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job
. I have decided to resign and look for a
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job
in a
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different
field.

Firstly
, I want to inform you that I have decided to resign from the team leader position. This is
mainly
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because
I am seeking for a
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job
in the management field, as I have completed my MBA while working at your
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company
; and not
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because
I wasn’t satisfied with the
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job
assigned to me.

Secondly
, I would like to
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tell
you that working under your guidance has
really
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helped
me a lot. It
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helped
me in the development of both personal and professional life. It taught me
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many
things such as time management, work ethics, handling of situations, safety and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more. I would like to thank you for all the support you have provided and guided me to achieve success
personally
and
professionally
. I am
deeply
saddened by the fact that I
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have to
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leave
this
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job
, as I was
strongly
attached to the work environment and
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people
who worked with me.

Lastly
, I would request you to provide me with a letter of reference and
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mention about the
work I undertook at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. It would be of a great
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help
, if you could consider my request and accept my resignation.

Thanking you in advance for you
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help
.

Yours
Sincerely


Tony
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Colaco

IELTS letter you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to your boss. In the letter: tell your boss of your decision and explain why you are leaving. Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving. Ask for a letter of reference.

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