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You are going to attend a training course at a college in another country. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the college accommodation officer. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe the accommodation you require • say when and for how long you will need the accommodation

Dear Sir or Madam, Good Morning, hope this letter finds you well. I am Akshaya from Chennai, India, writing to enquire about the accomodation options in Canterbury University. I have applied for a six month training course in Data Science which starts in March, and hence was asked to attend the orientation programme that is happening next week. Unfortunately, my Visa processing took longer than expected due to the pandemic situation, so I was not able to organise my accomodation prior to arrival. I am arriving at the Christchurch airport at 3pm on the 14th of February and would probably reach the University premises by 5pm. As I am completely new to the country, it would be really helpful if you could provide a single room with an ensuite in the university accomodation for 10 days. I understand that I have mailed you at the neck of the moment, but I would really appreciate if you can assist me on this. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks and Warm Regards, Akshaya
Dear Sir or Madam,

Good
Morning, hope this letter finds you well. I am
Akshaya
from Chennai, India, writing to
enquire
about the
accomodation
options in Canterbury University.

I have applied for a
six month
training course in Data Science which
starts
in March, and
hence
was asked
to attend the orientation
programme
that is
happening
next
week. Unfortunately, my Visa processing took longer than
expected
due to the pandemic situation,
so
I was not able to
organise
my
accomodation
prior to arrival.

I am arriving at the Christchurch airport at 3pm on the 14th of February and would
probably
reach the University premises by 5pm. As I am completely new to the country, it would be
really
helpful if you could provide a single room with an
ensuite
in the university
accomodation
for 10 days. I understand that I have mailed you at the neck of the moment,
but
I would
really
appreciate if you can assist me on this.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks and Warm Regards,

Akshaya
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IELTS letter You are going to attend a training course at a college in another country. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the college accommodation officer. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe the accommodation you require • say when and for how long you will need the accommodation

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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