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As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student studying third semester at the TKR institution. We are a group of 10 members planning to visit a historical Town exhibition to conduct a social survey as part of our project. I am writing to request some valuable information about the exhibition. Let me explain the contents of the information in detail. I'd really appreciate if you could include information about exhibition opening, closing dates and hours of operation. Nextly, regarding a number of stalls that will be installed during working hours of the exhibition. In addition, if you could possibly mention in regards to discounts available for any of the stores in the exhibition. I request you to provide details for the above-mentioned information and any other relevant data that will be helpful for my research at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sandeep Karamchedu.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student studying third semester at the
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TKR
institution. We are a group of 10 members planning to visit a historical Town exhibition to conduct a social survey as part of our project.

I am writing to request
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some
valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
about the exhibition.

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Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the contents of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
in detail. I'd
really
appreciate if you could include
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
about exhibition opening, closing dates and hours of operation.
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Nextly
, regarding a number of stalls that will
be installed
during working hours of the exhibition.
In addition
, if you could
possibly
mention
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
discounts available for any of the stores in the exhibition.

I request you to provide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
for the above-mentioned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
and any other relevant data that will be helpful for my research at your earliest convenience.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sandeep
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Karamchedu
.

IELTS letter As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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