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You are going to study at a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in the college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are, and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a newly registered student in your college for Fall, 2021. As I am not aware of the city in the UK where the institution is located, I would prefer to stay in the college residence. I am writing to express my interests in regard(s) to college accommodation. Let me tell about my requirements in detail. I would really appreciate if you could provide me a medium-sized room sharing with a like-minded students. I follow a dietary plan regularly to maintain my body shaping. Hence, it would be a great benefit for me if you could make such arrangements on special recommendations. Through my research from various sources, I came to know that college doesn't provide study table and closet in any allocated room. As a result, this could cause a problem for me to study and store my personal belongings. I kindly request of letting me know the other alternatives of making these arrangements if it is not included in the fee structure. I am expecting the details of the above-needed arrangements as early as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sandeep Karamchedu.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a
newly
registered student in your college for Fall, 2021. As I am not aware of the city in the UK where the institution
is located
, I would prefer to stay in the college residence.

I am writing to express my interests in regard(s) to college accommodation.

Let
me
tell
about my requirements in detail. I would
really
appreciate if you could provide me a medium-sized room sharing with a like-minded
students
. I follow a dietary plan
regularly
to maintain my body shaping.
Hence
, it would be a great benefit for me if you could
make
such arrangements on special recommendations.

Through my research from various sources, I came to know that college doesn't provide study table and closet in any allocated room.
As a result
, this could cause a problem for me to study and store my personal belongings. I kindly request of letting me know the other alternatives of making these arrangements if it is not included in the fee structure.

I am expecting the
details
of the above-needed arrangements as early as possible.
I
am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sandeep
Karamchedu
.
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IELTS letter You are going to study at a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in the college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are, and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want.

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  American English
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192 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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