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A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: -explain the arrangements you have made for him/her to get keys -tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house -say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

Dear Sarath, I hope you are doing great. I am glad that you are coming to my place on Saturday, but unfortunately I cannot pick you up as I have to attend my friend's wedding on the same day and won't be back at the house until evening. Do not worry, our neighborhood is friendly and will be handing the keys over to Mike on that day who lives exactly opposite to my house. When you arrive here, you can grab the keys from him and make sure to unlock the doors using a gold-plated key. Let me explain to you how to get to my home from the railway station. After heading out of the train station through the main exit, follow the path towards your right until the first round-about. Then, hire a cab and provide destination address as it is the cheapest mode of transport in this city. I will return home at 6. 30 PM and till then, you can relax for sometime. After I arrive, we will spend some quality time together the whole night watching movies on Netflix or visit few chill-out places in nearby areas. During this pandemic period, I believe you travel safely and I can't wait to see you. Lot's of love, Sandeep.
Dear
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Sarath
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I hope you are doing great. I am glad that you are coming to my place on Saturday,
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but
unfortunately I cannot pick you up as I
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have to
attend my friend's wedding on the same day and won't be back at the
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house
until evening.

Do not worry, our neighborhood is friendly and will be handing the keys over to Mike on that day who
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lives
exactly opposite to my
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house
. When you arrive here, you can grab the keys from him and
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make
sure to unlock the doors using a gold-plated key.

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Let
me
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explain
to you how to
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get
to my home from the railway station. After heading out of the train station through the main exit, follow the path towards your right until the
first
round-about. Then, hire a cab and provide destination address as it is the cheapest mode of transport in this city.

I will return home at 6. 30 PM and till then, you can relax for sometime. After I arrive, we will spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality time together the whole night watching movies on Netflix or visit few chill-out places in nearby areas.

During this pandemic period, I believe you travel
safely
and I can't wait to
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see
you.

Did you mean "lots"?
Lot's
of
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love
,

Sandeep.
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IELTS letter A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: -explain the arrangements you have made for him/her to get keys -tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house -say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

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212 words
6.0
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