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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Write at least 150 words.

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future 2eVk
Dear sir/ madam, subject: Complaint letter regarding your hotel dish. I'm Prameela Mary from east coast London and have been working as a Human resources manager in the WAS company. I would like to inform you that, Usually, all my company meetings occur in your local hotel on the second floor for the past three to four months. I'm fully satisfied with your service and also the discounts you offered to me. Today, I have organized a meeting with my higher authority to place the new candidates for the job vacancies in your local hotel. All the participants have given positive feedback about the infrastructure and the facilities of your local restaurant. But, the quality of the dishes was poor in taste with overcooked and smoke odor. I was totally disappointed with your service and I request you to take action again this service. I would like to suggest changing the catering service and also including some variety of Chinese dishes. Thank you yours faithfully Prameela Mary23/02/2021London
Dear sir/ madam, subject: Complaint letter regarding your hotel dish. I'm
Prameela
Mary from east coast London and have been working as a Human resources manager in the WAS
company
. I would like to inform you that,
Usually
, all my
company
meetings occur in your local hotel on the second floor for the past three to four months.
I
'm
fully
satisfied with your
service
and
also
the discounts you offered to me.
Today
, I have organized a meeting with my higher authority to place the new candidates for the job vacancies in your local hotel. All the participants have
given
positive
feedback about the infrastructure and the facilities of your local restaurant.
But
, the quality of the dishes was poor in taste with overcooked and smoke odor. I was
totally
disappointed with your
service
and I request you to take action again this
service
. I would like to suggest changing the catering
service
and
also
including
some
variety of Chinese dishes.

Thank you

yours
faithfully
Prameela
Mary23/02/2021London
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IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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3 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
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