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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. you should like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at musemum.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. you should like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at musemum. BX8j

I am reaching out to you regarding the part-time volunteer job at the museum. From my childhood I have very much interest in Arts and History and also currently pursuing a course in the field Art History. Moreover, the project work for academic credits is on museums hoping volunteer work help for studies and future career. In addition to that, I posses fluent communication in both languages English and French with reading and writing abilities. I am a multi-task oriented and enjoy challenges. I have unique talent of sharing high complex information into terms and concepts that visitors can understand. Due to college schedule I am open for weekend shifts from Morning 7 to Evening 6. If you are seeking for a volunteer with excellent skills and qualities the please consider me as the best choice for the work. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Best regards, Bala

I am reaching out to you regarding the part-time volunteer job at the museum.

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help
 for studies and future career.

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I posses
 fluent communication in both languages English and French with reading and writing abilities. I am a multi-task oriented and

enjoy challenges. I have unique talent of sharing high complex information into terms and concepts that visitors can understand.

Due to college schedule I am open for weekend shifts from Morning 7 to Evening 6.

If you are seeking for a volunteer with excellent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and qualities the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 consider me as the best choice for the work. I am looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best regards,

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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. you should like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at musemum.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

150 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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