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you have been working in an international company abroad. now you are going back to your home country without informing your office friends. write an apology letter to these friends. In the letter, you should write: apologise to your friends, explain why you are leaving, tell them what you will miss about them.

you have been working in an international company abroad. now you are going back to your home country without informing your office friends. write an apology letter to these friends. In the letter, you should write: apologise to your friends, explain why you are leaving, tell them what you will miss about them. Opkp
Dear john and peter, I am writing this letter to say sorry for not informing you about my return to India. I am really very sorry to not inform you about my departure as it was all in a hurry and was very urgent. As you guys were on your Christmas holidays with families, I didn't wanted to disturb you. Therefore, I had to return without telling you the reason. Actually, we have a family business of textile import and export named raymond textiles, and is run by my father and uncle since October 1996. A few days ago my uncle passed away and due to his untimely death, managing everything was left on my father, with no one to share the responsibility, as my cousins are still in school. Hence, he has called me back to join the business to sort everything out. I’m deeply saddened by the fact that I had to leave you guys without informing. I’ll miss you guys and other colleagues. Mainly, I will miss our weekend hangouts watching football, playing Fifa on play station, our Sunday cricket league and dinner treats. I hope you guys understand my situation and will forgive me for this. Lots of love, Steve
Dear john and peter,

I am writing this letter to say sorry for not informing you about my return to India.

I am
really
very
sorry to not inform you about my departure as it was all in a hurry and was
very
urgent. As you
guys
were on your Christmas holidays with families, I didn't
wanted
to disturb you.
Therefore
, I had to return without telling you the reason.

Actually, we have a family business of textile import and export named
raymond
textiles, and
is run
by my father and uncle since October 1996. A few days ago my uncle passed away and due to his
untimely
death, managing everything was
left
on my father, with no one to share the responsibility, as my cousins are
still
in school.
Hence
, he has called me back to
join
the business to sort everything out.

I’m
deeply
saddened by the fact that I had to
leave
you
guys
without informing. I’ll miss you
guys
and other colleagues.
Mainly
, I will miss our weekend hangouts watching football, playing
Fifa
on play station, our Sunday cricket league and dinner treats. I hope you
guys
understand my situation and will forgive me for this.

Lots of
love
,

Steve
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IELTS letter you have been working in an international company abroad. now you are going back to your home country without informing your office friends. write an apology letter to these friends. In the letter, you should write: apologise to your friends, explain why you are leaving, tell them what you will miss about them.

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  American English
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203 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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