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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college. v. 1

Dear Mr Hampson, I am Muller Fortner, one of your research assistants and lucky students, whom you have bestowed your blessing, wisdom and guidance during my academic years at the MIU University. Today, I am writing to ask a favour from you- to write a reference letter for me that I would require to submit to a prospective employer. I have been one of your most ardent students and we have finished several projects together including the 'Impact of Western attitude to developing countries' which was published in 'The Social Affair' magazine. After I have completed my post-graduation in Social Science from MIU University in December 2019, I have been trying to start a job and recently I have been invited to an interview as a researcher at Social Hub, an international company who works for social welfare in many countries. I applied for the job because it would enable me to closely work with other talented researchers and let me contribute to great social causes. I hope you would be happy if I get the job and continue doing the things you always wanted me to do. I hope you would be kind enough to write a reference letter for me mentioning how you know me, my strength, academic performance and how I might be suitable for a research-based job. Thank you in advance. I look forward to getting your reply soon. Respectfully yours, Muller Fortner

IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college. v.1

Dear Mr
Hampson
, I am Muller
Fortner
, one of your research assistants and lucky students, whom you have bestowed your blessing, wisdom and guidance during my academic years at the
MIU
University.
Today
, I am writing to ask a
favour
from you- to write a reference letter for me that I would require
to submit
to a prospective employer. I have been one of your most ardent
students and
we have finished several projects together including the 'Impact of Western attitude to
developing countries
' which
was published
in 'The
Social
Affair' magazine. After I have completed my post-graduation in
Social
Science from
MIU
University in December 2019, I have been trying to
start
a job and recently I have
been invited
to an interview as a researcher at
Social
Hub, an international
company
who works for
social
welfare in
many
countries. I applied for the job
because
it would enable me to
closely
work with other talented researchers and
let
me contribute to great
social
causes. I hope you would be happy if I
get
the job and continue doing the things you always wanted me to do.
I
hope you would be kind
enough
to write a reference letter for me mentioning how you know me, my strength, academic performance and how I might be suitable for a research-based job. Thank you in advance. I look forward to getting your reply
soon
.
Respectfully
yours, Muller
Fortner
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
Letter
8 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resources: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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