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You have been working abroad for several months but niw need to return to your country.

You have been working abroad for several months but niw need to return to your country. NWOWW
Dear Sir, I’m writing this letter to terminate my two year contract. The reason why I’m leaving is due to an opportunity that I need to grab in my home country. One of the best hospitals in my hometown offered me a position as a head nurse and willing to give me a higher salary compared here in Singapore. Another reason is my family, they are the reason why I decided to return to my country and I want to be with them. I enjoyed working with your organization and I’ve learnt a lot. I worked in your company for 6 months and in this short period of time I feel I have my family present with me and also meet some new friends here. While reading the contract that I signed 6 months ago, I notice that there is 2 weeks notice before I leave, so my last day of employment will be on 15th of March 2022. Thank you for everything and hoping for the best for you and your company. Yours Sincerely, Vin
Dear Sir,

I’m writing this letter to terminate my
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "two-year"
two year
contract. The reason why I’m leaving is due to an opportunity that I need to grab in my home country. One of the best hospitals in my hometown offered me a position as a head nurse and willing to give me a higher salary compared here in Singapore. Another reason is my family, they are the reason why I decided to return to my country and I want to be with them.

I enjoyed working with your organization and I’ve
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learnt
a lot. I worked in your
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company
for 6 months and in this short period of time I feel I have my family present with me and
also
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meet
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some
new friends here.

While reading the contract that I signed 6 months ago, I notice that
Did you mean "there are 2 weeks"?
there is 2 weeks
notice
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before
I
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leave
,
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so
my last day of employment will be on 15th of March 2022.

Thank you for everything and hoping for the best for you and your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Vin
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IELTS letter You have been working abroad for several months but niw need to return to your country.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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