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English project ideas letter

English project ideas letter DaXJE
Thank you for responding. I've been working on an Alzheimer's disease research project for a time now. I have written all of my research papers in English concerning Alzheimer's illness, as you are know, writing papers is required at our school due to T21C. In addition, I am continuing my research at Sabancı University Mustafaolu Laboratory. I'm currently working on a study regarding the amyloid hypothesis and neuroplasticity. As I continue my study, I observe that society is completely unaware of cognitive disorders. My teachers also use the expression "Unutuyorum, yaşlılıktan herhalde, normaldir. " I've searched for awareness-raising programs in our country, but grievously there aren't any. Is it feasible to develop a curriculum or education for high school students to learn about Alzheimer's disease? Perhaps we might make contact with the Turkish Alzheimer's Association and try to put our project into action. Although the field has been divided on whether forgetfulness is related with aging or not, my understanding and current research on neuroplasticty indicate that it is not connected to aging. If the project goes well, we may be able to enter it in contests or present it. Although I'm not sure whether it will fit into the "write a research paper" format? Can I work on this topic? It could be great to have an online meeting before school starts.
Thank you for responding. I've been working on an Alzheimer's disease
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research
project for a time
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now
. I have written all of my
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research
papers in English concerning Alzheimer's illness, as you are know, writing papers
is required
at our school due to T21C.
In addition
, I am continuing my
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research
at
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Sabancı
University
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Mustafaolu
Laboratory. I'm
currently
working on a study regarding the amyloid hypothesis and neuroplasticity. As I continue my study, I observe that society is completely unaware of cognitive disorders. My teachers
also
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use
the expression
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"
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Unutuyorum
,
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yaşlılıktan
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herhalde
,
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normaldir
.
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I've searched for awareness-raising programs in our country,
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but
grievously
there aren't any. Is it feasible to develop a curriculum or education for high school students to learn about Alzheimer's disease? Perhaps we might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
contact with the Turkish Alzheimer's Association and try to put our project into action. Although the field has
been divided
on whether forgetfulness
is related
with aging or not, my understanding and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
on
Possible spelling mistake found.
neuroplasticty
indicate that it is not connected to aging. If the project goes well, we may be able to enter it in contests or present it. Although I'm not sure whether it will fit into the
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
write a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
paper
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
format? Can I work on this topic? It could be great to have an online meeting
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before
school
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starts
.
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IELTS letter English project ideas letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
223 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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