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Write an apology letter to the director of the library

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Dear Madam, I am writibg in regards to my library books which are due in the near future. Ungortunately, I have a very urgent matter that I must attend to. You see, my cousin has fallen ill and is in the hospital. As you can understand, he is in need of support from my family. Regretfully, I will not be able to return my books to you as my plane departs today and I will not have enough time to make a trip to you. I understandthat this situation makes me eligible to receive a fine. However, I would greatly appreciate if you would waive this fine on the grounds that my circumstances ate very urgent. I trust that this will be possible as I have consistently returned my books on time in the past. I hope, you will take my letter into consideration. Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter. Yours faithfully.
Dear Madam,

I am
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writibg
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in regards to
my library books which are due in the near future.
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Ungortunately
, I have a
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very
urgent matter that I
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must
attend to. You
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see
, my cousin has fallen ill and is in the hospital. As you can understand, he is in need of support from my family.
Regretfully
, I will not be able to return my books to you as my
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plane
departs
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today
and I will not have
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enough
time to
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make
a trip to you. I
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understandthat
this situation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me eligible to receive a fine.
However
, I would
greatly
appreciate if you would waive this fine on the grounds that my circumstances ate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
urgent. I trust that this will be possible as I have
consistently
returned my books on time in the past. I hope, you will take my letter into consideration. Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter.

Yours
faithfully
.

IELTS letter Write an apology letter to the director of the library

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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