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celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service

celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service NWOJ2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to express my pleasure of the party that I held at your restaurant last Sunday. I spent a lot of time searching the place In order to prepare for my wife’s party. Fortunately, my colleagues have highly recommended your restaurant which is one of your brach on 235 ABC street. The event commemorated my wife’s 30th anniversary, and all our best friends are invited. I am pleased to say everything went according to plan and it was a thoroughly enjoyable and memorable evening. We are particularly impressed by the cuisines on that night because it seems that you are not only concentrating much on the quality of foods but also care about the presentation of foods. Besides, your staffs including waiters and receptionists were friendly, welcoming, and attentive, and they make us feel the same at home. I would like to thank you and your team for hosting such a special event. Yours faithfully, Luc Nguyen
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to express my pleasure of the party that I held at your restaurant last Sunday.

I spent
a lot of
time searching the place In order to prepare for my wife’s party.
Fortunately
, my colleagues have
highly
recommended your restaurant which is one of your
brach
on 235 ABC street.

The
event
commemorated my wife’s 30th anniversary, and all our best friends
are invited
. I am
pleased
to say everything went according to plan and it was a
thoroughly
enjoyable and memorable evening.

We are
particularly
impressed by the cuisines on that night
because
it seems that you are not
only
concentrating much on the quality of foods
but
also
care about the presentation of foods.
Besides
, your staffs including waiters and receptionists were friendly, welcoming, and attentive, and they
make
us feel the same at home.

I would like to thank you and your team for hosting such a special
event
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Luc
Nguyen
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IELTS letter celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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