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FORGET MY BELONGING IN THE THEATRE

FORGET MY BELONGING IN THE THEATRE gGkPD

Dear theatre management, I am writing because I forgot my jacket during a recent showing at your cinema. The jacket is made from handmade hemp so it is rough and very distinctive. It is dyed blue and there is embroidery on the sleeves of brightly colored flowers. I was in cinema 6 for the afternoon session of King Kong. I ordered my tickets online beforehand and I just double-checked to confirm that my friend and I were seated in row K, seats 12 and 13, near the center of the cinema. I would advise you to check under the chairs in the cinema and in your lost and found section. If you are able to locate my jacket, please give me a phone call at 781-334-5054 and I will drive over to pick it up. If it is more convenient, you can also mail it to the return address on this envelope. Thank you for your assistance. Regards, Jeremy

Dear Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 management,

I am writing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I forgot my jacket during a recent showing at your cinema. The jacket is made
 from handmade hemp This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is rough and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 distinctive. It is dyed
 blue and there is embroidery on the sleeves of brightly
 colored flowers.

I was in cinema 6 for the afternoon session of King Kong. I ordered my tickets online beforehand and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 double-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 to confirm that my friend and I were seated
 in row K, seats 12 and 13, near the center of the cinema.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would advise you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 under the chairs in the cinema and in your lost and found section. If you are able to locate my jacket, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 give me a phone call at 781-334-5054 and I will drive over to pick it up. If it is more convenient, you can also
 mail it to the return address on this envelope.

Thank you for your assistance.

Regards,

Jeremy