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on the recent holiday you lost a valuable item.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing a letter to inform you that I have lost my valuable item recently on went for a holiday vacation form Italy. Since I had insurance for all items when I was travelling during the holiday, but the vacation had lost an expensive item for my Wristwatch, this is the most valuable cost for $3500. I have covered the insurance claim that money, and I am hoping to ask for refund money. This reason is not boring because I have travelled from Italy, but this time my colleague join us, by the way, I stayed in princess tower near the airport when I left with the hotel after that I am searching my valuable item for the wristwatch. I think that I have two handbags luggage, but some other bags drop the items. I have reported to the police station, and they have filed FIR that reaches the police in the hotel searching for the items. Finally, the manager asks for some information. As the watch is an expensive one, and I would like to claim insurance for lost items. The insurance amount is $3000 to cover the items. I received for Fir copy and insurance document to claim the insurance amount attached to this letter. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, James Krish
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing a letter to inform you that I have lost my valuable
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item
recently on went for a holiday vacation form Italy. Since I had
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insurance
for all
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items
when I was travelling during the holiday,
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but
the vacation had lost an expensive
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item
for my Wristwatch, this is the most valuable cost for $3500. I have covered the
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insurance
claim that money, and I am hoping to
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ask for
refund money.

This reason is not boring
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because
I have travelled from Italy,
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but
this time my colleague
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join
us, by the way, I stayed in princess tower near the airport when I
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left
with the hotel after that I am searching my valuable
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item
for the wristwatch. I
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think
that I have two handbags luggage,
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but
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some
other bags drop the
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items
. I have reported to the police station, and they have filed FIR that reaches the police in the hotel searching for the
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items
.
Finally
, the manager
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asks for
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some
information.

As the
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watch
is an expensive one, and I would like to claim
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insurance
for lost
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items
. The
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insurance
amount is $3000 to cover the
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items
. I received for Fir copy and
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insurance
document to claim the
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insurance
amount attached to this letter.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

James
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IELTS letter on the recent holiday you lost a valuable item.

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6.0
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