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You have been talking about environmental problems in your English class. Write a composition about “Our planet – how we are destroying it and how we can save it.” Write between 150 and 200 words

You have been talking about environmental problems in your English class. Write a composition about “Our planet – how we are destroying it and how we can save it. ” Write between 150 and 200 words 0aME9
Above all, there is a lot of pollution and environmental problems on Earth. We don’t just have to worry about melting snow caps or endangered animals. If we throw away a piece of trash or just spoil our belongings unnecessarily and want something new out of everything, that’s not exactly the most environmentally friendly activity either. Protecting the environment is very important to me, so what I can compost, for example, vegetable peel or coffee grounds, eggshells or tree leaves is not only good for the land, but also for my conscience. Garbage is collected selectively. When I take water to school with me, I take it to my own bottle so I don’t use the plastic bottle. I advise everyone to collect garbage selectively and compost vegetables if possible, as we want to live even on this planet. This should be better taught in schools or workplaces, as it is never too late to try something new and good for our environment. can also be good. There are plenty of great interesting videos or websites on this topic these days.
Above all
, there is
a lot of
pollution and environmental problems on Earth. We don’t
just
have to
worry about melting snow caps or endangered animals. If we throw away a piece of trash or
just
spoil our belongings
unnecessarily
and want something new out of everything, that’s not exactly the most
environmentally
friendly activity either. Protecting the environment is
very
important
to me,
so
what I can compost,
for example
, vegetable peel or coffee grounds, eggshells or tree
leaves
is not
only
good
for the land,
but
also
for my conscience. Garbage
is collected
selectively
. When I take water to school with me, I take it to my
own
bottle
so
I don’t
use
the plastic bottle.

I advise everyone to collect garbage
selectively
and compost vegetables if possible, as we want to
live
even on this planet. This should be better taught in schools or workplaces, as it is never too late to try something new and
good
for our environment.
can
also
be
good
. There are
plenty
of great interesting videos or websites on this topic these days.
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IELTS letter You have been talking about environmental problems in your English class. Write a composition about “Our planet – how we are destroying it and how we can save it. ” Write between 150 and 200 words

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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