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Complain about your roommate to accommodation Office at University

Complain about your roommate to accommodation Office at University dprjr

Accommodation Office 13, King Road, Edinburgh Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and request for another accommodation next year. My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my roommate always has friends visiting. He also has parties which usually end early in the morning, several times a week. Furthermore he offers to borrow my things without my consent. He always bring pet to our room as well. It is very annoying and I cannot accept this behaviour and situation any longer. Especially because I have very important exams next term and I really must study hard. This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me not to share a room with somebody else. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jhon

Accommodation Office

13, King Road,

Edinburgh

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and request for another accommodation next
 year.

My main problem is that I cannot study in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
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because
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. This is why I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 grateful if I could have another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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next
 term. It would be most convenient for me not to share a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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Yours faithfully
,

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